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themute
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since 2006-05-08
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Maryland

0 posted 2006-05-12 06:05 PM



I feel like big feet in small shoes
But that’s much better
Than the shoe too big
A shoe you cant rely

To fall off wile walking and not reach the end
This would be more maddening and frequent
Than the pain of such discomfort
Of small shoes big feet inside


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The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
1 posted 2006-05-12 11:15 PM




"I feel like big feet in small shoes"

Intriguing, themute.


bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
Posts 197
Bloomington, IN
2 posted 2006-05-12 11:17 PM


Me too!
FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

3 posted 2006-05-12 11:25 PM


creative thoughts

enjoyed

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