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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-05-11 10:48 PM




seeking illusions

only still hearts can manage

death holds its meanings


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BROTHER JOHN
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1 posted 2006-05-11 11:08 PM


Thanks Icebox!

I guess the greatest illusion to most is they will not die.


Honeybunch
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2 posted 2006-05-12 03:15 AM


Well said, Mr. Icy!
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-05-12 03:16 AM


yep

good one

Martie
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4 posted 2006-05-12 10:05 AM


I'm yearning for a still heart.  
sim0riah
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5 posted 2006-05-12 10:20 AM


Very nice. Short and to the point!

RIch

S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom
6 posted 2006-05-12 12:49 PM


Let illusions be
for those afraid of life.
Death begat us all.


s.a.g.

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
7 posted 2006-05-12 01:24 PM


Because life has ceased to penetrate?

Dave

The Lady
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The Southwest
8 posted 2006-05-12 05:29 PM



Outstanding! That's all.


themute
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9 posted 2006-05-12 06:19 PM


arthur grey that isn't the appropriate synonym count for a hiku. icy this is a wonderfully done hiku.


FNG
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10 posted 2006-05-12 11:35 PM


powerful write!



Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2006-05-15 07:54 AM


Most of don't even realize.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

picturegramic
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12 posted 2006-05-16 10:49 PM


illusions truthened
still hearts still hold much meaning
death is victory!

great job!
picturegramic

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