Open Poetry #37 |
We Are The Fateless |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
we are the fateless we walk we breathe and we live we are not spoken for we are not called for our steps are always new our words have never been spoken our air has never been used we have no mothballs we need no medicine we are not bound no ropes can hold us nor words nor death we are pure we are the fateless |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
I could take this to be a kind of mantra to life. It does have a positive outlook on life and gives hope for the future. I like how you say we are pure; in all respects we are. You yourself speak a language that is not yet known to many. |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: :: bows :: |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
GAWD I LOVE this - you write with such simplicity, power and depth all at once. This is a keeper Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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