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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2006-03-11 02:46 AM


we are the fateless
we walk
we breathe
and we live
we are not spoken for
we are not called for
our steps are always new
our words have never been spoken
our air has never been used
we have no mothballs
we need no medicine
we are not bound
no ropes can hold us
nor words
nor death
we are pure

we are the fateless

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byski
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since 2006-01-26
Posts 235
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2006-05-15 10:17 PM


I could take this to be a kind of mantra to life. It does have a positive outlook on life and gives hope for the future. I like how you say we are pure; in all respects we are. You yourself speak a language that is not yet known to many.
XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
2 posted 2006-05-15 11:38 PM


::smiles::      :: bows ::
Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
3 posted 2006-05-16 10:43 PM


GAWD I LOVE this - you write with such simplicity, power and depth all at once.  This is a keeper

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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