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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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It's a misty moon tonight and I'm wondering if you've missed me. Do you remember the last time we kissed? It was on a night much like this; but that mist was just a small solo cloudburst trapped inside my eyes. What are you doing tonight? Could it be that you might see this same misty moon tonight? And could it even be that you might remember me? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I often wonder the same thing about a certain man in my life so well written! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Kacy...  Don't we all do this? Some days..life is just way too painful. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I liked how you played on words and sounds very much and ... the wondering rings so familiar. I bet a lot can relate! Much enjoyed your beautiful poem. misc'e |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling here, in thanks. I found I liked the sound of mist, missed and kissed, and it just happened to be a misty moon night here. Of course, I did have someone in mind.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You just reminded me-- tomorrow night, I'm having a party--a very special celebration of the moon and I'm inviting you to help us pray for peace. We need you, Kacy... The moon will be there. I'll bring the "mist".  love you my sistah |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
aw, I love you too, m'lady! It would be an honor to be at your mooning party!  LOL. We can read poetry, dance, drink, and cuss out the government.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
makes me think back to my first kiss....sheesh, that was ages ago...she tried to french kiss with her mouth wide open......Yo! Hello! I hear an echo... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
that is too funny Barryit seems you survived the experience |
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SilentShadow Junior Member
since 2006-04-20
Posts 32Fl. U.S.A. |
There's a full moon in Florida tonight, what are you doin'. Good work, you took me away to times well past |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Another gorgeous write from a loving heart. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Silent Shadow, enjoy that moon tonight! Thanks, Sue. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is beautiful, Kacy... as are you...  "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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blitz Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 19 |
wow.. i havn't read anything this touching for a while and i am greatly honored to have read such a wonderfull peice tonight thank you for your write it was magnificant and i only hope to become as good of a writer as you are.. touching deep with in your unconious soul and finding the will to write what you feel i take my hat off to you my dear |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Strange what certain situations can trigger in the thought process isn't it?....Enjoyed the read ..thank you.. Goldenrose. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Yes, I noticed it, through my own bit of mist as well . . . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Those misty moons sure do make us wonder don't they though? Thought provoking writing Kacy, as per your usual. Much enjoyed this. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Well, you certainly put me in a mood. I have had someone on my mind all day and your poem wrappped it up and put a big bow on it. It's just perfect Kacy. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
smiling here, thanking each of you for reading this misty post Lady...now go untie that bow/beau |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
This is sooooo goood! Thanks for the write (and the mood) that it put me in. Hugs, Bubbles |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yer welcomehave a fun weekend |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
So sweet... |
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Archea Member
since 2006-05-13
Posts 65United States |
dont we all wonder at one point if the people we care about, that are far away or dont know we exsist, are staring at the same moon and thinking of us? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I look at the night skies and wonder, too, if someone is looking up and thinking of me. loved Barry's reply because I had the same reaction ...when I was given my first french kiss  M |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Kacy...Beautiful memories of a past time cherrished by you and shared with us. Thanks...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile.... no mist upon my moon last night. In fact, she was fat and full and glorious, perfect for the Buddha birthday... Friday the 13 too. I was chuckling all night.... "yellow moon yellow moon" Neville Bros. thanks for all who helped to pray for peace.  exhale I inhaled. |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
The things we link to remembrance misty moon shall you remember me i perfer the clouds to part and the stars to shine |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow you! I want "what you're having!" This is another great piece to add to the library. You are just getting too good at this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kacy~ You know my adoration of the moon ... this is just lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I am sure HE did think of it, because I think what made an impression on you had to have made one on him too. Now, softly call his name tonight and I am sure you will hear his quiet reply, "I am here". Best to you, martyjo |
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