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Open Poetry #37

Yesterday

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-05-10 10:31 PM

There is a feeling inside my soul
That I just can't ignore.

It runs through me like
A dark thunder cloud
Ready to pour.

I am caught between
Yesterday and Tomorrow.

Unknowing what I must do
I keep holding on to you...

Debo

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-05-10 10:50 PM

Well, that's a rough space to get stuck in, so I sure hope you can find your way to break free!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-05-11 03:57 AM

yep, the rock and the hard place

you'll know eventually

BirdeeB
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 106
USA

3 posted 2006-05-14 09:57 PM

Thank you for reply by the way
the feeling you catch here is the sadness to me its missing that special someone it short and to the point very good

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2006-05-14 10:08 PM

A simple but very expressive write, saying
it like you feel...You did fine!

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

5 posted 2006-05-15 01:57 AM

Thanks to all you for your lovely replys
And it was like being between a rock and a hard place what a weight to carry.

Debo

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