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Soul Reason |
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bens101 Junior Member
since 2006-05-05
Posts 32 |
I'm falling apart it feels as if someone has ripped my soul from the walls of my body and left me to stand outside cold. It's just wrong I can never do anything right my friends hate me I think I'll crawl into a ball and end my life. Just to escape is to paint the world and smile whenever you can banishing darkness from overcoming light again. Ask yourself why deep wisthin what drives you to keep going because there are things that you might want to experience. Benjamin Prins 2006. |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
you got this poem to emit the emotion that you wanted..the 2nd half was better than the first half imo...maybe play with some different words but overall i can see where you are coming from...just get more creative with it...nice read thanks for posting... |
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