Open Poetry #37 |
Awakening |
jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
When I need love, I can see all the good in you Waiting for me to make my dreams alive. I opened my eyes and started beliving in myself Becomming free of the bondage you had over me. I opened myself to the truth. I saw it was you who set me free to be me. No longer a tree standing still in the light of night.I came alive to the dreams you invoked. When I need love, the good in you wakes me up and my dreams become real. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kimberly~ 'I opened myself to the truth. I saw it was you who set me free to be me' And He has put your feet upon the pathway He would have you take~ Write it gal~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Something that I feel should take years of life and maturity to write Your words I feel are quality dave |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Marge that is quite a compliment comming from you, your work is so touching and inspireing. Dave thank you I wrote that many years ago and wanted to share it here. Actually I believe God wrote it through me but it came straight out of my heart. |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
This is beautiful.... Lost for words. Hugs, Fee Expressions, |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Thanks Fee, That to me is a true compliment. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed....James |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Everyone needs love and need to do it for themselves you can't give advice they never follow it they must learn to cope with the path of love themselves |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"No longer a tree standing still in the light of night.I came alive to the dreams you invoked." ~ Strikingly beautiful! Love can be grand and can make us become more than we ever dreamed we could be! EA |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
James, Thank you. RedstoneEB and earth angel Thank you both for your sharing and your insight. Earth Angel I am glad you appreciated my poem It came from deep inside my soul. I wrote it during my divorce. |
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