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Liz Sinclair
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since 2006-05-06
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0 posted 2006-05-10 11:36 AM



Middle Class Dilemma


Empty hands--bare, raw and overworked.
Panic-stricken; backbone of labor,
no leisure time for indulging.

Weathered faces, cracked and dry,
amid scripted smiles
choking on sermons in reverence--
praising an elusive deity
in humble gratitude.

Our father who art in Heaven,
hallowed be thy name...

Give us this day our daily bread...

Forever and Ever Amen.


Unanswered prayers
in bleeding houses of shame/
hiding unbridled passion
bedded down in the dark.
(Whispers of secret unions)

Ssssshhhh.

Give and give,
the expected donor.
More money needed,
work harder!

Pride in vocation,
families wither from neglect.
Orphans for the taking,
Uncle Sam’s pride and joy.

Never enough,
it’s never enough.

© Copyright 2006 Lizette Sinclair - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-05-10 12:04 PM


This is your heart speaking.  There is no rhyme for the shame of this neglect.  You nailed it - there is never enough!
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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2 posted 2006-05-10 12:06 PM


well done.

very well done.

I look forward to more.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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3 posted 2006-05-10 12:21 PM


very impressive, I felt the raw emotions this was written with...


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