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andy04
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since 2005-11-16
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New South Wales

0 posted 2006-05-10 07:23 AM


I sit in the park where I dwell for the boy, I love so well, he took my heart away from me, and now he wants to see it free.
I see a girl on his lap, he says things to her that he never said to me. I ran home to cry on my bed, not a word to my mother was said.
Father came home late that night,and looked at me from left to right. He saw me hanging from a rope, he took a knife to cut me down and on my dress a note was found: "dig my grave, dig it deep, dig my grave from head to feet, and on top place a dove, and remember this- i died for love..."

the simplest thing in life is love
the difficult thing in life
is finding your true love!

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andy04
Junior Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 22
New South Wales
1 posted 2006-05-10 07:34 AM


what do you think?

the simplest thing in life is love
the difficult thing in life
is finding your true love!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2006-05-10 09:39 AM


andy04
I think you have a long road to travel and
I hope it's a good one. Good write enjoyed the read.

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