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Black Wind |
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bens101 Junior Member
since 2006-05-05
Posts 32 |
It has hit we are scared tonight my sister and I huddle close as the rain pounds on the roof and the thunder strikes far to close. My sister grips my arm a tear drips down her face just as the shingles rip off and I wake up in bed quickly clutching my chest. I hear her voice from the kitchen she calls help me help me I don't want to die I love life! It's pitch black wind and rain pour in as an angry god tries to take my sister thank god I saved her. Benjamin Prins 2006. This didn't happen. How do you like my imagination  ? |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Imagination yes, but why didn't your sister save you Dave |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whewww, this gave me chills while reading, and I visioned you going through a tornado... especially since they are presently current events...well done! |
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