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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2006-05-09 11:07 AM


I am the weeper.
All memories follow me
Silence borrows my speech.
Thou art too irresistible like a rose,
grown from a place no beauty should grow--
deny me, a moment in thy arms
weeping, still weeping--
what breath shall be my own in love?
I long for something more.

I am the sorrow.
Quickening, stirred within the depths
each memory be a form of me.
Ceaselessly roaming--
Fall through my thoughts, flow like the streams,
each sin be a blessing of courage--
what lord should judge the ill-sick foe
sped through the soundless murmur of thou
though the spirit hath spread hereafter.

I am the dream.
Gather me the lies
whilst yet in favour of hope.
The heart regrets a meeting--
soul hast thou agreed?
The memories that followed
bow before the rose dost wilt away
poor fool that died before an age--
yet dared not live again
implacable among others.

I am death alone.
Think ill of me if thou shall
and then—then, come and join me.
Be kind the grave on th’ passing--
yet thou art not dead—but dead inside
what stars possess is distance from emotions.
And in distance is the beauty of breathing without love--
breathe alone thy warrior soul permits
courage is far greater than been the hero.

I am the lonesome mind.
It matters not unto the weak
to linger on a memory for passing hours.
Let us be unconquerable by past--
embrace her as she has embraced thou.
What sea is left to sail--
love is all but one of many
and yet romance hast found the years.
Poets always write of such--
but I wrote what was there to be
now holding onto an embraced memory.


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1 posted 2006-05-09 05:58 PM


Lee~
The impact of your dynamic title drew me in ... the penning held me~

This is poignantly lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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JesusChristPose
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2 posted 2006-05-09 07:16 PM


"I am death alone.
Think ill of me if thou shall
and then—then, come and join me."


~ I enjoyed this very much. Each stanza described the heading with much vision. And the above lines were my favorite.

"Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself."

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