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To Keep The Light
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To Keep The Light |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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Moisture from my breath connecting water droplets sparking crashing into thread weaving, tempting, teasing to keep the light a secret threads rubbing friction forcing through the air through the heat to keep the light till the seasons like seconds ticking moving, crashing flying by we are not September we are not November we are not without light |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
At first glance this could be construed as being abstract..but perhaps it has something to do with the feelings within?...The unusual things that can make people become entwined with each others sensibilities?..An opposite attracts analogy perhaps? Just my thoughts here...no matter it is still excellantly clever..and even more importantly... skillfully written..thank you.. Goldenrose. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
I agree that it is very skillfully written. It seems you give life to those inatimate objects that you describe. I am intregued... But anyways, GO OIL GO! Sorry if you are a Calgary fan, so sorry.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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