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playing.with.crayons
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0 posted 2006-05-08 06:00 AM



Each silver curtain
swirled, twirled inside my
Rainbow coloured nightmare

And each silver curtain
cut into subconsciousness
creating.... creating...
perhaps
a White Dwarf

And Dru offered me acid!

I created my own world here

Each silver curtain
swirls, whispers through the night sky
like smoke, it disappears
but the imprint is not forgotten

Beautiful, glorious
bright purple flowers
burst and bloomed before my eyes
stemmed from my arms and into my heart.

Resonance, pulsing
like techno in my veins
Silver curtains
rain on me
It's the butterfly effect
And it all began
When I slammed the door

farewell the ash-tray girl

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Gaia
1 posted 2006-05-08 03:34 PM


A very interesting write. I enjoyed the rainbow view, and heard that door slam.
playing.with.crayons
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2 posted 2006-05-09 06:13 AM


thank you for the lovely reply Midnitesun
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