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The Leaf Desert
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The Leaf Desert |
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juj1 Junior Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 22Laval Quebec Ca |
The soft wind is blowing the tender breeze Within these forest roads still enlightened, As a silent flow flickers all the living trees Sounds echo the ending of paths lightened. The sunset provides this magnificent sight Soon to be devoured by a planned turning, Our world slowly spinning away for a night Letting other roads be blessed with loving. The final rays of light enchant this ground As unique colors are reflected once again, A garden of dropped leafs stands unfound Within the lonely hearts shattered by pain. As trees cry pourings of an old green sight Changed leafs fall by uncountable amount, Colors of delight embodied by a cruel fight Linking by similarity all miseries in account. Sanding time forever present within nature As each sign of its passing stands expected, Different droppings echo the nearest future With the unknown strength never mastered. An autumn of delight stands in total misery For each leaf represents a world's sadness, A season crying messages for those lonely That so many lie with feelings of emptiness. The wind blows away during the cold night What has fallen so suddenly to our display, By its flows it will spread in beautiful sight A desert of hidden cries unheard to this day. Kenny Vatché Avakian |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed the imagery of seasonal changes you wrote of, contrasted against the changes we humans endure, the inevitable march toward our own personal winters. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. |
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gypsyheartx Member
since 2006-02-09
Posts 104Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland |
"The wind blows away during the cold night What has fallen so suddenly to our display, By its flows it will spread in beautiful sight A desert of hidden cries unheard to this day." That is so beautiful! This poem reminds me so much of my backyard in the fall. Great poem! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kenny~ Welcome to PiP !! Your entrance piece is lovely~ Thank you for sharing ... will watch for more~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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juj1 Junior Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 22Laval Quebec Ca |
thank you all for the wonderful comments. |
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