Open Poetry #37 |
Stardancer |
Liz Sinclair Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93Atlantis |
Stardancer She moves like a ray of light, divine and statuesque. She sparkles like the reflection of the moon over the ocean. The soft pulsations of the cosmic core is the music that possesses her soul. Delicately she glides, like the element of beauty emerging from a newly formed blossom. And from the horizon she leaps into the arms of a celestial embrace, where she tantalizes the desire of twilight's passion. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
No thick skin needed Like everything we have a picture, an image, and an idea Dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
how beautiful! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A most appropriate name for this poem. Very fitting. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Liz I read it again I often sound like I say do it heavy, but I say to you On the re-read Tread gently O're images will seek reality In the Mind Dave |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Very good imagery |
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juj1 Junior Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 22Laval Quebec Ca |
Now thats my kind of poetry, filled with words that inspire all others to a seek a similar style and idea. Well done |
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Liz Sinclair Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93Atlantis |
You all are far too generous, but I must admit...it's addicting. Thank you so much, all of you! |
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