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Liz Sinclair
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0 posted 2006-05-07 11:38 PM



Stardancer


She moves like a ray of light,
divine and statuesque.
She sparkles like the reflection
of the moon over the ocean.
The soft pulsations of the cosmic core
is the music that possesses her soul.
Delicately she glides, like the element
of beauty emerging from a
newly formed blossom.
And from the horizon she leaps
into the arms of a celestial embrace,
where she tantalizes the desire
of twilight's passion.

© Copyright 2006 Lizette Sinclair - All Rights Reserved
Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-05-09 05:25 PM


No thick skin needed

Like everything we have a picture, an image, and an idea

Dave

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2 posted 2006-05-09 07:25 PM


how beautiful!
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3 posted 2006-05-09 09:00 PM


A most appropriate name for this poem.
Very fitting.

Bodger
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4 posted 2006-05-09 09:26 PM


Liz

I read it again

I often sound like I say do it heavy, but I say to you

On the re-read

Tread gently
O're images will seek reality
In the
Mind

Dave

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5 posted 2006-05-09 10:00 PM


Very good imagery
juj1
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6 posted 2006-05-09 10:35 PM


Now thats my kind of poetry, filled with words that inspire all others
to a seek a similar style and idea. Well done

Liz Sinclair
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7 posted 2006-05-09 11:24 PM


You all are far too generous, but I must admit...it's addicting.  Thank you so much, all of you!
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