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Open Poetry #37

You're Lapping My Heart

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2006-05-07 04:31 PM

           my soul is weary

and the future looks too dreary

               to believe in

and i don't know what to do because you're so leary

           that i'm deceiving

                 your heart

when all i've wanted from the start

was a small movie part

          playing Cassanova

                                      love,

                                      howard

Katerie
Member

since 2006-01-27

Posts 92
Central New York

1 posted 2006-05-08 06:18 AM

when all i've wanted from the start

was a small movie part

playing Cassanova

Very nice. Aside from the content of yours, which is always amazing, let me say that I really like your formatting. It gives character to all you write, further than that created by your meticulously chosen words.

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

2 posted 2006-05-08 01:18 PM

thanx katerie

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