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one thin monkey
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one thin monkey |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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One thin monkey on my back I held him to feed and nursed him to fat even as teeth nibbled me to the raw I have one thin monkey and laugh when he gnaws as if I were tougher than he. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this morning my heart smiles with you... a great way to look at things hugs me |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh wow...this just drove itself into me... I have it's sibling!!!!! Outstanding and I am keeping this (like I don't keep it all).  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
May you starve that sucker to death serenity blaze! :-) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Not into thin monkeys, now there are some chunky ones I'd be interested in. LOL  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
i'm what some people call "slender." me, i just call it what it is and say i'm skinny (though, with my wife's cooking, not as skinny as i used to be) back in the day, i used to tell people i was wiry. in fact, that's the truth of the matter - lean and sinewy... but you know what? when i want something to move, it moves. i'v often heard the phrase "you're awfully strong for such a skinny guy" small doesn't mean weak, eh? btw - i saw the title and started laughing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write  |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'll trade my elephant for your monkey  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
You sure have a way with words serenity. Your endings always amaze me. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
grins to Mike--we don't talk about the "elephant"... As for that monkey? That little expletive--his weight fluctuates so much, I quit braggin' on him!  love and smiles to all, with my gratitude for reading.  and C? admit, I was right about the tie...  |
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