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Foxyoasis
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2006-05-04 03:39 PM



why do we want to be
with someone we are not
why do we try so hard
when we know it will just
get cut

open the wounds again and
pour on the salt i say
i just wanna go back to
yesterday when you and me
were 2

sliding through time and
mental angst back to a place
were we were thankful

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-05-04 04:19 PM


it sounds like you are looking into my life here
Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2006-05-04 04:50 PM


sigh :P

guys are evil

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
3 posted 2006-05-06 11:55 AM




Perfectly said, consise, yet powerful and relatable.  I'm saving this...for someone to read - He needs to see it. Thank you for writing this~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2006-05-06 01:00 PM


ty

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Les Gartner
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5 posted 2006-05-06 08:03 PM


No Julie, guys are not evil, only certain people are. Everyone is trying to survive and everyone is trying to come out on top. And in that scramble to live, people scratch and claw and forget that there is a better way, an easier way, a truer way. It is to live in such a manner that you are not ashamed to see the face that you're shaving in the morning.

So easy to say so hard to do.

Les

Foxyoasis
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6 posted 2006-05-06 08:13 PM


true "Le sigh

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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