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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Doxology We all search for the golden ring We’re all cut from a silver string Some search in and some search out But that we search there is no doubt Some search the sea for answers there Some climb the mountains in despair Some search a sacred inner zone Some search the outer face of stone Some treat life with a velvet glove Some think the answer lies in love We do the dictates of our heart That is the most important part Some hold the string until the end Some twist a twist in symbols bend And some will say we don’t exist And some will swear there’s beyond the mist But truth lies in Pandora’s Box Where in lies the paradox |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
loved the title, and the wisdom behind your words, and in-between the lines... Your a master teacher and I have learned this morning... Some hold the string until the end Some twist a twist in symbols bend And some will say we don’t exist And some will swear there’s beyond the mist But truth lies in Pandora’s Box Where in lies the paradox Excellent!!! |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear Ssymour, You are making us think. Maybe you know the answer to this one: "Where was Adam when Eve opened Pandora's box?" I think he was in the Paradox's box. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Love your reply, you are a sweet heart. Good morning dear. BROTHER JOHN, I thought he was eating an apple. LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A most excellent write today Sy! Now this one has me thinking.... ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you sweet. |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear Seymour, Was it the apple on the tree or the "pair" on the ground? I like your reply for it is more biblical. Some Jews claim the fruit was a fig. Well, they maybe right as a FIGure of speech! |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
The quest for the elusive obvious. Trying to measure our shadow...with our foot, and wondering why it never seems to end. LOL The quest itself is the paradox. I love this Sir Sy. As I have loved every penning of yours. And yes...no matter what is released...beneath it all...There is Hope. LOL Which is also a paradox. There was never a lacking. :: bows :: |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Your title drew me in like a song. So right, we all search. Wonderful work Sir. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BROTHER JOHN They say the wit grows sharper as we grow older. I'd hate to fence with you a few years from now. Enjoyed your reply. LOL Uriah, Yes I smoke HOPE and eat theLOX of paradox every day. LOL |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
And what was the truth of Pandora's box? Was it love or was it clocks-- WHICH was sealed beneath the lid? ...Curious lessons better left hid. Very interesting poem, Seymour, which travels that age old question. Why? Klassy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy, And that is a paradox. LOL |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear Seymour, now, now--let us not allow "fences" to come between us ever! LOL I do enjoy your humor! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BROTHER JOHN As I enjoy yours. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and I enjoyed this poem  as well as the replies |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, You are a love.  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
heheheh! I'm getting addicted to your poems.  ~ Klassy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy, And I have already become addicted to you.  |
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