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poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand

0 posted 2006-05-04 05:44 AM


there will be times when a writers eyes may not always be their own

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Call Me Sweet

03 May 2006


Call me sweet
and know it was true
Call me cute and I will love you
This winter to summer to a gloat
across a world of access to net
Unified in ways upon sunshine
call me smart and sexy
and I will make you mine

Take my hand and look into my eyes
tell me what you do see
beyond my whimper and cries
Make me comfortable, make me warm
adore me for the sweetness I am
Be caring and I will care as well
be kind and know life is swell

Call me sweet
and know it was true
For I am cute, at least in the eyes of God
Walk along Maple Ridge and feel my heart
Travel the Lougheed highway and find my home
Be with me in British Columbia
and know this was Rome


Maple Ridge is a District Municipality in British Columbia, Canada, located east of Vancouver,
on the Fraser River. The District of Maple Ridge was incorporated 12 September 1874, and
is British Columbia’s fifth-oldest municipality (after New Westminster, Victoria, Langley,
and Chilliwack.)


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares


© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-05-04 07:57 AM


this was so marvelously happy, it gave me chills...tremendous ending...that last line is a keeper, and so are you.


poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
2 posted 2006-05-04 08:29 AM


tell that to the other 'love of my life' three forums over

(where do I find the laugh emoticon-smiley thing or do I have to bring my own  

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