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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2006-05-03 10:02 AM



it takes a hold of me
so damn suddenly out
of my skin I bet to reach
so out of touch so very
very weak.

magical pill come save me
now take it soon before
I drown,come up for air
at times just try try
not to get out of line.

the shakes
lets me know I have a
bigger then to deal
with.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
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Bloomington, IN
1 posted 2006-05-03 12:47 PM


Your poetry is brilliant!
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-05-03 01:16 PM


I like this
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2006-05-03 02:21 PM


thank you its about morphine withdrawl i was sick in the hospital for 3months. and now im dealing with getting off narcatics

just lil bit of a story behind the poetry

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


BROTHER JOHN
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since 2006-04-06
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4 posted 2006-05-03 04:08 PM


Only through fear and trembling is the worth while born. O yes, we must not forget birth pains, too.


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