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FNG
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0 posted 2006-05-03 06:26 AM


Your pennings told of marvelous creations,
Not surpassed by your counterparts.

So much dwelled inside you,
Of creativity and mastery.
Not penetrated by those,
outside your clivity for art.

Silence surround you.
Eyes disconnected from realism,
But filled with such enthusiam.

Sailed in a superb exploration
For fantasy and ecstasy.

Tresures locked away,
In your world of autism.

A boy in my class of five years olds has autism. A brilliant boy with giftedness in art who can draw better than most adults. (3D drawings)



© Copyright 2006 Danielle Tan - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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1 posted 2006-05-03 11:08 AM


Well written piece...and, isn't interesting how many autistic children have such profound talents....
LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-05-03 11:51 AM


you should frame this and give this gift to him....for he has powerfully inspired you
FNG
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3 posted 2006-05-03 08:58 PM


Thanks for reading   LeeJ and Toerag.

Good idea LeeJ should frame it as a gift for him.

I marvel at the things that they can do.

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-05-03 11:10 PM




“Sailed in a superb exploration
For fantasy and ecstasy.”

They are wonders, these children of ours
and this is a marvelous poem.

Thank you FNG.


stevebrklynnyc
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5 posted 2006-05-04 01:09 AM


Sometimes god has other plans for those who show special gifts.  Truely a wonderfull write, thank you for posting such a heart felt thought.  Steve
FNG
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6 posted 2006-05-05 06:08 AM


Thanks steve.
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