Yesteryear's Dreams Come True (Inspired by Enchantress)

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Open Poetry #37

Yesteryear's Dreams Come True (Inspired by Enchantress)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2006-05-01 01:07 PM

Yesteryear's Dreams Come True
~*Marge Tindal*~

Tenderly he placed
Message into a bottle
Set adrift on sea
Sweeping outward it will go
On the tides of evermore~

Swept homeward to heart
Waiting on another shore
Opened, read, cherished
Answered on outgoing tide
Come, find me quickly, my love~

***Perhaps someone will join me in continuing this Tanka ?***

THANKING Enchantress for the immediate inspire~
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~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-05-01 01:25 PM

Ah Marge!
Indeed you make me feel honoured.
Glad I could inspire this beauty.

*Tanka for the tip*

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2006-05-01 01:25 PM

Ah, a truly wonderful inspired write Marge!
Much enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2006-05-01 01:27 PM

Wonderful reply to Nancy's poem...

Ben

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

4 posted 2006-05-01 03:52 PM

Inspired writing Marge!!

believe in what your heart feels...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2006-05-01 05:50 PM

such beauty...both inspiration and reply

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2006-05-01 07:10 PM

Beautiful!

Eric

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

7 posted 2006-05-01 07:20 PM

Beautiful imagery and sentiments here..enjoyed..thank you..

Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-05-02 04:44 PM

Enchanting, Marge.

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