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Open Poetry #37

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DejaEntendu
Member

since 2005-12-06

Posts 82
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2006-01-19 06:56 PM

I walked down to the old theatre,
in hopes of a tune,
to spark a memory,
bring back a friend,
Please.

When I arrived,
the only site found-
vacant seats,
stench of mahogany,
not what I had in mind.

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

1 posted 2006-01-22 11:23 AM

We re-visit old because we feel we need to

It is never what is was because, neither are we

Dave

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2006-01-26 02:53 PM

excellent write...because we can relate to the desire to reminisce and because you painted good imagery...you lead us to that same conclusion each time we try it...loved it!

DejaEntendu
Member

since 2005-12-06

Posts 82
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2006-01-26 07:13 PM

Thanks for the comments. I'm glad you could relate. Great point bodger, it is diffrent because we've changed as well, but sometimes, missing what was can leave you so empty, which is what I was trying to express.

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