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Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
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0 posted 2006-05-01 03:23 AM


Were times ever silken,
its hands smooth upon my face,
reflection satin on the heart
where tears have left no trace?

Would that beauty tread in stealth
upon days and ancient nights,
sculpt touch in shadowed kisses,
dare dream of old delights.

Crystal chains hug the cheek,
draw light from golden embers,
Seek the glow in ambered fall
on lips that love remembers.


~ Klassy Lassy ~

[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (05-01-2006 04:12 AM).]

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-05-01 09:07 AM


"Crystal chains hug the cheek,
draw light from golden embers,
Seek the glow in ambered fall
on lips that love remembers."

Oh my...how beautiful this is Karen!
My favourite stanza above.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-05-01 09:14 AM


"Crystal chains hug the cheek,
draw light from golden embers,
Seek the glow in ambered fall
on lips that love remembers."

~ Your pen drips pure gold! So poignant and poetic! Uniquely and creatively expressive.

A real gem of a write, Karen!

Hugs with love,
Linda
Flowers


StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
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L. A. (Lower Alabama)
3 posted 2006-05-01 09:18 AM


Exquisite! :-)
Honeybunch
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South Africa
4 posted 2006-05-01 09:38 AM


"Crystal chains hug the cheek,
draw light from golden embers,
Seek the glow in ambered fall
on lips that love remembers."

Lovely write but especially the above.  Enjoyed!

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
5 posted 2006-05-03 07:41 PM


Thank you all for taking time for me!  You are the gems in my day!

hugs,
Klassy

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