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Open Poetry #37

Smoke

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-04-29 01:58 AM

I'm lost in this cloud of smoke
Walking blind never looking behind
Waiting for my star to shine.

As each year slips into the past
It's gone forever can't get it back.

Trying to live my life walking
On the right path.

It ain't easy with the devil wispering
Take another toke as the room turns
Into a cloud of smoke.

Debo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-04-29 06:23 AM

nope, it sure ain't easy, is it?

I liked this

shmity72
Junior Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 26
wa usa

2 posted 2006-04-29 06:42 AM

I take my poetry seriously. I liked it.

shades of paul
Member

since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

3 posted 2006-04-29 08:50 PM

"As each year slips into the past
It's gone forever can't get it back"
HOW TRUE THIS IS, A VERY GOOD POEM...PAUL

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

jennifer101
New Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 8
texas usa

4 posted 2006-04-29 09:55 PM

been there done that:

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

5 posted 2006-04-29 10:41 PM

You are so right passing shadows it isn't easy but it can be done if you want it bad enough. shimty72 I am glad you enjoyed my post. Paul thank you for your nice reply, I've had some time to read a few of your post and I'd like to say I enjoyed reading everyone so far. Hello Jennifer thank you for the sweet reply and I look forward to reading some of your stuff here in Passions Poetry.

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