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Time Brings |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Time Brings And listen with me to the tick ‘o’clock in some grandfatherly antiquated form with seemingly a bigger pendant that would bring a longer moment still, too swift in its, oh chimed, timed, this, its brass movement of pendulum’s swing where time rushes except, unless, always until when in great wait and want, some deeper need existing, some urgency enlisting a need to know now, and you stare, stare at a moment in hang, a rope tightening some artery, to stay, to stay, holding steady moving too fast, something cold…trying to finger its way into some route of blood, with some silent [Oh My God] echo, echo, hollow, hello hello… Oh… hello? Yes, Please! Tell me… save the notes, save the grace, telephone, tell a tree, tell the wind… ‘tis good news…this night. Time brings all things; tonight it magnified into something more. The lightest slip of more, bringing love. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
I am left to be reminded of these words What was living in a happiness born Was there hope to awake from a sleep into the morn and to read the rest A Time to Live a poet who cares |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Time brings all things yes indeed  beautiful write! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Waiting is always the hardest thing a human can do, isn't it my Sunshine? But the news can be good, and the investment can be fulfilling...and in this time, someone special came through triumphant! Have a wonderful weekend. TD |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You are really a ray of sunshine.  |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Got Sunshine on my mind. Great Poem....paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Some things are worth waiting for! It's easy to remember when a long-distance call invariably meant bad news.....what a joyful development that these days it just as often means good things coming our way. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..indeed it was news worth waiting for! Hugging you tight for keeping us all informed. ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Anticipation .... and then good news. Wonderfully expressed, SIL. *hugsyou*....jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
A story well told here Sunshine. Thank you for keeping us all up to date. |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear Sunshine, Thanks for your timely poem. Eternity is pregnant with time! |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
PS But, Sunshine, could not time be pregnant with eternity? |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Stunning poem, Sunshine. I love it! Yes, it was wonderful news about Martie! And yes, we can all breathe and smile now. You depicted it perfectly. - Owl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
when in great wait and want, some deeper need existing, some urgency enlisting a need to know now, and you stare, stare at a moment in hang, a rope tightening some artery, to stay, to stay, exactly Momma K... exactly... Huggin ya both tight.... |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
It's probably not how much, how little or how fast it is but how we use it. A thoughful write. |
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