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Open Poetry #37

Our Own World

JesusChristPose
Senior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa

0 posted 2006-04-27 10:40 PM

Through stares and frowns
And looks of disgust
We look into each other
And it doesn't matter
Because our world
Will still exist
Through it all

"Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-04-28 04:26 AM

I understand...
this hit home for me

time to start creating another world, at least for me anyway

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2006-04-28 10:13 AM

You can certainly see those stunning eyes in the new pic...

As for the words...do you think they care as much as you think?

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

3 posted 2006-04-28 10:23 AM

powerful write.....but...don't you think it
makes the worth of a smile even more so?

JesusChristPose
Senior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa

4 posted 2006-04-29 11:09 AM

Thank you both Susan and Dixie for taking the time to read this quick thought I put into words.

Luminosity - I am smiling! Thank you too.

"Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself."

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