Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
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2006-04-26
09:11 AM
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Rewrite:
She
Satiates my visions field Shunting lily pads away Making daffodils to stay
Bringing pristine valley green Hewing colors mystic new Resurrecting Randy’s view
Using wings of flattery Soothes away my wrinkled brow Allowing time to slow some how
Piercing through the blind of veil The Jonah whale that swallowed me Forever searching in the sea
Zen me into life again a Coup that melts the foil of true Made me whole, made me new
And though I’m full to overstuff Just love for her, seems not enough
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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
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2006-04-26
09:37 AM
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all men should be as such..
Morning Sy!"too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
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2006-04-26
10:10 AM
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She does, indeed.  
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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posted
2006-04-26
01:39 PM
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She's a very lucky lady Sy!  A most excellent read. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~  ~ Trace my body with your words, in doing so, you touch my heart ~
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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
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2006-04-26
04:02 PM
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She sounds like love and magic.
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2006-04-26
05:22 PM
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Now that is some kinda woman! Hang on to her! She's a keeper! She does all that and still manages to keep your Randy dandy! 
And her man is an ever so sweet sonneteer! 
 EA
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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
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2006-04-26
06:03 PM
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Susan, And all women too. LOL
Sunshine 
Nancy, Too
Lady A little of both.
Earth Angel I haven't heard Randy complain. LOL
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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posted
2006-04-26
06:37 PM
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another joy to read
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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
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posted
2006-04-26
07:50 PM
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passing, Your read and comment gives me joy. Thank you.
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