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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Grace and lace and emptiness and tiny teeny mightiness with the sculptures it is as if it's on the shell - seldom licking lips in hell leaving all the singing bells Ringing hungrily and "yes" is carving into the bleed of this - the feed the starving bit of greed of bliss... was this-- the birds are need of underneath the olive leaf is heavy in the birded beak aflight working wingedly for peace and habits kiss as if they were a damned machine a pigeon's plea - a mustard seed on the draft and "yes" is madness nodding "blessed" we dressed ourselves in crack and laughed we conned ourselves redemption trashed-- slumped in shoulder'd loneliness; and rabbits laugh; when they're scared-- They scream. Then they pray they're cute enough to hop away intact while the rhubarb grows. * * * |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, And only the rhubarb knows.   |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"They scream" as do we. Love you lady. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Grace and lace and emptiness and tiny teeny mightiness with the sculptures it is as if it's on the shell ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the birds are need of underneath the olive leaf is heavy in the birded beak aflight working wingedly for peace ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ your rhymes ARE lace and grace lovie...  "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take ... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
when they're scared-- They scream. Then they pray they're cute enough to hop away intact A very powerful piece of work serenity. I am constantly amazed with your work. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A little reminiscent of Emily Dickinson, with a light seasoning of ee cumings - but even more exquisite and even more interesting. This is a masterpiece of masterpieces, but as delicate as a snowflake, and as unique in its composition. Can poetry get better than this? If it can, it is beyond my ability to conceive the possibility. - Owl |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
incredible write lady... just had to comment on the bunnies...we have babies at our house...not more than 3 or 4 inches long, and they are the most adorable things I have had in a long time, they make me smile when nothing else will...my grandson tells me 'come on grandma, let's go bug the bunnies'  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oooooh, luminosity, please give the bunny babies a gentle one-finger stroke each and send them my South African love. - Owl |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sorry I haven't been around much, Karen. I'm taking this in and rolling it around...and shaking my head. (Tim signed up today.....sigh.) |
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mariae Member
since 2006-04-24
Posts 54Denmark, Europe |
If we were all just cute little bunnies :-) Liked it a lot. Maria -In a world of thoughts- |
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