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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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He could be anywhere stroking his beard drinking his Red Zinger oh I know I promised to follow him but things came up as things always do I got a postcard from Denver sold the Harley bought two bikes can’t wait for you to arrive then a card from Vermont it’s bone crushing down and dirty cold here need you to keep me warm and a card from Sisters, Oregon when you get here I will feed you Indian plums and boiled crab you will never leave I still think about joining him at times I wonder if he ever thinks about waiting for me |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
I love it I can't even pick a fav part... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kate, I have to admit I am a fan of your style of writing...another good one!  ..jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you Dominique. Jo, I have to admit I am a fan of your style too. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey Lady! I am a little late for welcoming you, but please forgive me and let me hang out a while. I loved this poem. It's earthy and real, and oh-so-familiar. I feel like I know this guy.  Much enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hehe, I think I've seen him, with Red Zinger dripping from that beard flying down the open highway... he will never park it |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh Serenity, I'm sure you know him and Midnite, I'm sure that was him you saw. Ha ha ha... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
The things we think of doing that have a way of never quite happening.... This has a sense of wistfulness and adventure about it that I really like. Of course, it stirs the emotions, too, with a sense of the little things one knows about someone close to their heart, things that become more vivid simply because they are out of sight and missed. I like this very much! |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
I met him once on the way to Sturgis. He grinned the whole way and only stopped once...to pick a bug out of his teeth. lol Wonderful write! Wonderful read! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Enjoyed Haven't seen him around here recently though.and then He created the horse... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
The Lady...Enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing with us...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, an enjoyable read...tell him to stop and take time to smell the roses M |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
thanks for sharing this with us, really enjoyed it |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Ah Klassy Lassy you read me so well. I loved your response Uriah! That was him all right!Skyfire, if you see him tell him I’m sorry. Just couldn’t do it. Thank you Paul, M and poetry_queen |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
he sounds like a man of adventure; I hope he doesn't waste a lifetime adventuring elsewhere when peace may be right at his doorstep! Enjoyed your writing, Lady. Sadie |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sold the harley? whoops but I enjoyed you here |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely, Kate. As Klassy Lady said, wistful. Whether he is real or fiction, itt is probably best that you didn't join him and probably best that you did wonder about it. - Owl |
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