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Qindi
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0 posted 2006-04-25 09:07 AM




Internal injury or damage

Models the flower
Opens in the branch
Is not willing to die of old age

Time shakes hand
Was grasping the heart
Again does not have the pine to open

A string tear
Falls on the place
Blossoms and bears fruit

A good words
The fresh flower is ordinary
Opens in the wound

A travel
The foot went home
The heart has not  come back

Kisses
Does not know opposite party
Is bringing the mask

Group of adults
Looks at the flower bud
Is broken off by the hand


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Qindi
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since 2006-04-24
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1 posted 2006-04-25 09:24 AM


My MSN: Qindi2005@hotmail.Com, welcome to relate. Thanks!
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2 posted 2006-04-25 11:03 AM


Oh Qindi~

I'm liking this VERY MUCH~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-04-25 11:11 AM


"The foot went home
The heart has not  come back"

~ Those lines were particularly poignant for me.

Hi, Qindi! Wecolme to pipTalk.com! Enjoy exploring the site, writing, reading, replying ~ and making friends!

Warm, welcoming hug,
Earth Angel
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