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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-04-25 07:29 AM

you came to the ocean often
in tennis shoes of thought
almost barefoot nude on occasion
when your woman wanted to dance

and there was music seeping down
the fuzzy concrete of blue stew
and their electric gray pastiches
pococurante to pulchritude

you brought your mountains also
with the handle ends willing
to make the tides want your texture
and the coat room of your secrets

there were horizons you dreamed of
in gawdy gowns that were revealing
like the blue stone you worshiped
when it marked the dark's forehead

as another early indigo morning

______________

daark

mariae
Member

since 2006-04-24

Posts 54
Denmark, Europe

1 posted 2006-04-25 07:37 AM

I am there...visualizing it all

Maria

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-04-25 07:41 AM

One could never be indifferent
to rites such as this...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2006-04-25 07:47 AM

thank you Mar' for the review.

___________

ms sun, thanks to you for your touch

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2006-04-25 09:34 AM

I feel the need for the ocean on this morning..

You always take us there Mr. D.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

5 posted 2006-04-25 09:47 AM

The imagery in this was very good. I like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

6 posted 2006-04-25 12:37 PM

The colors implied in this make my heart sigh, D, indigo mornings and possible coral dawns, mountains green and turqoise oceans. A pulse is soft here... in duplicate.

~ K

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2006-04-25 01:22 PM

yes....you captured her lovely spirit well..
tender, caring and sharing of your words D.

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take ...
but by the moments that take our breath away.”

G.Carlin

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-04-25 05:07 PM

…in tennis shoes of thought…in tennis shoes of thought… dang Stranger! You do this thing so well!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2006-05-09 02:15 PM

DS

"you brought your mountains also
with the handle ends willing
to make the tides want your texture
and the coat room of your secrets"

I wonder if there are still coat rooms, ghost caught on hooks of time?

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

10 posted 2006-05-09 02:36 PM

Strange ideas that make you think oddly but thats how poetry usually turns out

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2006-05-09 03:37 PM

have missed reading you

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

12 posted 2006-05-09 04:43 PM

Damn hunny... it is sooo good to read you/this again...

missed your way more than I 'member...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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