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Open Poetry #37

The Right Woman

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2006-04-24 01:26 PM

        i could meet your needs

          but everytime i read

             your directions

i lose faith in my ability to pass your inspections

so i guess i can't be your "Private Selection"

but your butter pecan would taste so good in my ice cream cone

         my vanilla is so alone

without your chocolate syrup covering my bones

            now you're gone

and i don't know how many Ben & Jerry pints i'm going to have to eat before my heart can sing a happy tone

                  again

                                         love,

                                         howard

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

1 posted 2006-04-24 01:51 PM

I like how you penned this Howard.
A different spin on the aches of love.
Much Enjoyed

Maybe switching from Ben & Jerry's to Hagen Daaz might help?

And may you find the right one.

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ... Swim out to it"

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