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Qindi New Member
since 2006-04-24
Posts 7 |
World profile chart World Have a nation Nation Have a city City Have a house House Have a building crest Building crest Stand one person Hand Carry a pole gun Gun muzzle Project bullet Bullet Shoot one person That person Pour in the ground Ground Grow a pole gun The outside of the gun Is a person Person's outside Have a house House Have a building crest The outside of the crest Is a city The outside of the city Is a nation Abroad Is a whole world [This message has been edited by Qindi (04-24-2006 09:53 AM).] |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions. I am not sure I understand the meaning or intent of this. Are you saying that violence and war are a never-ending circle, that the bloodshed is an inevitable part of who we are as humans? Welcome to Pips, hope to read more from you. |
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Qindi New Member
since 2006-04-24
Posts 7 |
Thanks the commentary. I am the study compose a poem, asks everybody to help me to revise, posts in under. My MSN: [email protected], welcome to relate. Thanks! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Qindi~ Welcome to PiP !!! I am interested in where you are from, and what studies you are in~ The piece you've submitted here is a little confusing to me ... but will try to understand if you'd care to expound a little more on the intent of your words~ Again ... WELCOME TO PIP !! *Huglets*  (*Huglets* is just my way of giving out a little HUG !) ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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