Open Poetry #37 |
Inspiration ala Dylan |
shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
As sure as the Hard Rain Falls, I listened for years to your lyrical twists. Magical Dylan words always giving me Shelter from the Storm. Woven thru the musical notes, you Tangled me up in Blue. Thoughts Blowin in the Wind, it made me think, if only I could do that. Truly inspiring tapestry words of life, emotion, and Love Minus Zero. I Don't Think Twice, and I knew it would be alright, So with a Twist of Fate, now I play and sing them. Yes, Things have Changed, While I was Watching the River Flow. So before I go to Knocking on Heaven's Door, and always being in pursuit of my poetry hobby, would it be all right if I can call you Bobby ? paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you [This message has been edited by shades of paul (04-24-2006 07:42 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
shades of paul Enjoyed the read. |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Thanks Seymour, may you stay forever young........paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Nice work, especially that last line. I think you know him well enough to call him Bobby. "It doesn't matter inside the Gates of Eden" |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Dear Lady, Thank you, you angel you, ...paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
I loved the way you used the titles to his songs to write this wonderful poem... Great,Great,Great... Debo |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Fabulous !! he has always been a favourite of mine Hope |
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shmity72 Junior Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 26wa usa |
I found that humorus. though i would have liked you to put in a 'slow train come'n'... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Dylan was, and still is a great influence in my life...I heard "Blowin' in the wind" at a crossroads in my life, it started me down "The road less traveled by" (Frost) I dropped out, and never looked back.. Good stuff, paul...I enjoyed your poem ----------ice ><> |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Thanks Debo, I thought it would be a refreshing change of pace........paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Thank You for your reply Hope.... May you stay forever young. paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Slow Train Coming, one of my favorites, I play and sing alot of those tunes. Thanks for the comments Shmity72. paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Dear Ice, thanks for the warm response..... paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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