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On an Island
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On an Island |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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On an Island On an Island of my mind I built a temple of a kind A shoal to hold my timid soul An inward journey to my goal A path to find my inner core A journey into evermore To fish a streams affinity To see within infinity And there I found a sky of night A shoal of souls of burning bright So many that I could not count Impossible the huge amount Each star that gleamed a life itself All lighting up a common wealth A coenzyme of now and then All burning up the time of when It was too much to comprehend Beginnings to each time of end |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yanno how in the movies, there is always some island native (conveniently located nearby) and he paddles up, all friendly like, and shows the poor shipwrecked folk how to survive? (just nod, here) He usually teaches them how to spear fish and they give him jewelry... yer like that.   (I have fantasies.) *winkie-wink* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, You are one of my fantasies.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., Tom Hanks could have learned a trick or two from you on that castaway island!  Of all the stars, you are the brightest!   Love & Star Light, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Of all the Angels you are the sweetest. |
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miabug Member
since 2006-04-19
Posts 59Canada |
That was beautiful...  Mia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
miabug Thank you so much. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Cast upon the now and then, I wish I could remember when auras did not seem so far to dream upon a lucky star. You are a bright one, Sy! Your poems shines! ~ Klassy |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly lyrical! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy Lassy Thank you lassy, Ericc Thank you my friend. |
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