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Honeybunch
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South Africa

0 posted 2006-04-19 11:21 PM


Round and round spectacular fire
moves into the rhythm of soul
and Poi is given a grand rebirth
far from ancestral ground
where the force of a warrior man
and the grace of an island girl
trained and grew into maturity.

And this spry and lithe dancer of fire
smiles out to the midnight hours
the secrets of a vast universe
still yet to be realized
and I know today that someday
the forces of love will unite.

Ringed and entwined in circles of fire
love grows the head of a lion
in guard and protection of
the fragility of womanhood.

Step in, step in, with apprehension
because the circle of love never dies
and he who would call himself a man
must rise up in all honesty
to the incredible force of the dance
and the immeasurable reach of the flames
night and day swirling and twirling  
from the beginning and unto the end!

Helen / 20 April 2006


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time prophet
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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees
1 posted 2006-04-20 11:34 PM


Helen, If it was in SA then it sure was far from the ancestral home. Nice point of view you have put on it though.
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2006-04-21 01:11 AM


Frank - thanks for the read.  Yes, in SA because my middle son is the one for poi - maybe he has the fire inside where it counts!
Take care.
Helen

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-04-21 04:55 PM


What an intriguing write, Helen. This fire dance sure is a cool but hot ember of an ancient tradition.
Ericc
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4 posted 2006-04-22 04:26 PM


Excellent write Helen!

Eric

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