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she swept them up again
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she swept them up again |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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She bears down, letting go, in gifts that glitter her self embroidered sands, dangles love in a birth of shells, seducing skies to write of moons to light the darker paths, blindly, i turned away, then tried to find her sacred gems, but she chose to sweep them up instead. [This message has been edited by Balladeer (04-24-2006 08:38 AM).] |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I can understand some of this, some I cant, but I could float with the words Dave |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nothing compares with your view of the sea InkedOne...Passions drives forth the birth of precious things, and carries them, comforts them...as every mother knows...no other relationship is quite as enduring or emotionally full. Loved this...didn't want it to slip by. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooo I'm glad I didn't miss this one! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess A delight to read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Michele... this is breathtaking! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
pretty good. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Reminds me of the birth (or should I say rebirth) of Venus.... A delightful read --------ice/ford ><> |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Always a favorite Michele.Swept me away. Jason |
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