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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2006-04-21 09:54 AM


She bears down,
letting go,
in gifts
that glitter
her self
embroidered sands,

dangles love
in a birth of shells,

seducing skies
to write of moons
to light
the darker paths,

blindly,
i turned away,
then tried to find
her sacred gems,

but she chose
to sweep
them up instead.

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (04-24-2006 08:38 AM).]

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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-04-21 04:22 PM


I can understand some of this, some I cant, but I could float with the words

Dave

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2006-04-23 01:58 PM


Nothing compares with your view of the sea InkedOne...Passions drives forth the birth of precious things, and carries them, comforts them...as every mother knows...no other relationship is quite as enduring or emotionally full.
Loved this...didn't want it to slip by.
TD

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2006-04-23 03:17 PM


ooooo I'm glad I didn't miss this one!
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2006-04-23 03:20 PM


inkedgoddess
A delight to read.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2006-04-23 04:46 PM


Oh my Michele...
this is breathtaking!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
6 posted 2006-04-23 07:09 PM


pretty good.
ice
Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
7 posted 2006-04-24 06:21 AM


Reminds me of the birth (or should I say rebirth) of Venus....

A delightful read

--------ice/ford
  ><>

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
8 posted 2006-04-24 05:49 PM


Always a favorite Michele.Swept me away.

Jason

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