My love, the day has passed

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Open Poetry #37

My love, the day has passed

IntoTheRain
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 51
Westwood, CA

0 posted 2006-04-19 07:21 AM

All around and beyond me
They’re saying something I’ve never known
In whispers as fires burn low
All I can do is maintain self control
This could be it
I’m losing this

You swore..
With that smile
You’re out, you’re out the door
My love, who would reach so far?
Now you’ve lost your chance

We’re locked in a coma
Sleeping, and sleepless acting
I’ve been patiently waiting
But we’ve lost that touch
And the nights keep rolling on
With colorless bursts
We begin to dream

I can feel you sigh
In a rush and all at once
The day has passed

You swore..
With that smile
You’re out, you’re out the door
My love, who would reach so far?
Now you’ve lost your chance

With eyes that aren’t quite yours
And colors you never wore

With eyes that aren’t quite yours

Too late, the stars
Are off tonight

- o_O.. Like painted lines, they divide us

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2006-04-23 06:50 PM

This has a rhythm that makes me think it's a song? *S* If not... it would make a good one! *S*

IntoTheRain
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 51
Westwood, CA

2 posted 2006-04-24 05:52 PM

yeah.. cookies for being the first to figure it out haha.. i shoulda mentioned that, this one and the other i posted with it are both meant as songs..

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