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DejaEntendu
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since 2005-12-06
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Pennsylvania

0 posted 2006-04-19 07:32 PM



hello everyone
Having been around in a while, but like to post a poem every once in a while to get some feedback, and just look around. I'd appreciate it if you could tell me what you think of this, and am open for any and all advice/input.

I saw your face
in a shard of glass
your eyes still wet
it was evident
they had never dried
you knew all along
and my face in them
I swore it gave me hope
til I gazed upward
searching for white rain
but the sun beat down
and not a cloud was gray
so a shattered soul
walked on alone.

Also let me know what you think it's about, I like to see if people can tell what I'm really writing about.
Thank you.

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