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DejaEntendu Member
since 2005-12-06
Posts 82Pennsylvania |
hello everyone Having been around in a while, but like to post a poem every once in a while to get some feedback, and just look around. I'd appreciate it if you could tell me what you think of this, and am open for any and all advice/input. I saw your face in a shard of glass your eyes still wet it was evident they had never dried you knew all along and my face in them I swore it gave me hope til I gazed upward searching for white rain but the sun beat down and not a cloud was gray so a shattered soul walked on alone. Also let me know what you think it's about, I like to see if people can tell what I'm really writing about. Thank you. |
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