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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2006-04-19 06:49 AM


In Reverse.

Going through the motions.
Backwards. Stumbling.
Lost, broken and on the wrong path.
Depressed, cold. Boredom.

Living life in reverse.
Everything negative.
That glass isn't half full. Almost empty.
Run down. Ragged. Torn.

React In reverse.

Going through the motions.
Taking control of your emotions.
Perspective. Joy.
Optomistic. Postive. Genuine.
Moving forward.

Living life outside the path of least resistance.
Every goal obtainable.
This moment achievable.
A full glass, without compromise.
Built up. Tranquil. Joy.

Perspective.

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Paul Wilson
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1 posted 2006-04-19 10:24 AM


Kellie...Stay positive dear friend and the world will shine it's spot light on you.
Loved the contrasting between negative and positive in this piece...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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