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Realisation Of Love Lost
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Realisation Of Love Lost |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Realisation of love lost Feeling lost and alone As waves wash ashore The dreams I once had Would matter no more Realisation of love lost While reality hits home The light started fading I was knelt there alone Grieving in this silence Dreams no longer exist My lonely heart echoes Surrounded in the mist Drained of the passion That was once inspired There's no turning back Where dreams expired Hope©2006 Link to the poem with music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/101/poem_8326222.html |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
Ode to a Good Night Kiss Sleep was like yesterday why was wake the sleep A retarded paradise to untangle and dream This anger and terror that pain in poetry Flesh torn in a meaty tender unto an aching grid of thunder Who were thy to praise a living God, with out speak As unto silence, a drumming of reign the deafness of lightening Unknown, an author by name trapped in an endless rainbow The colours all of black and blue faded and corrupted in grammar to relate ------------------------- My piece may have nothing to do with your poem, yet for some reason, I stopped off in the middle of my night and composed these words here. a poet who cares |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Hope Your words are brilliant but I had hoped to see you write as if you took life by the scruff, said 'I have this talent to write' and wrote words that fill someone up to over-brimming. Your ability to write, your'e skills are something I have always admired There is a sky, there is a world, there is you with your talent and in your words it seems almost as if you are sacrificing that talent. I am out of order on this, but your quality screams use it Dave |
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