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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2006-04-18 11:23 AM



Realisation of love lost

Feeling lost and alone
As waves wash ashore
The dreams I once had
Would matter no more

Realisation of love lost
While reality hits home
The light started fading
I was knelt there alone

Grieving in this silence
Dreams no longer exist
My lonely heart echoes
Surrounded in the mist

Drained of the passion
That was once inspired
There's no turning back
Where dreams expired

HopeĀ©2006
Link to the poem with music and graphic below

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/101/poem_8326222.html

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poettothecars
Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
1 posted 2006-04-18 12:14 PM


Ode to a Good Night Kiss

Sleep was like yesterday
why was wake the sleep
A retarded paradise
to untangle and dream

This anger and terror
that pain in poetry
Flesh torn in a meaty tender
unto an aching grid of thunder

Who were thy to praise
a living God, with out speak
As unto silence, a drumming of reign
the deafness of lightening

Unknown, an author by name
trapped in an endless rainbow
The colours all of black and blue
faded and corrupted in grammar to relate

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My piece may have nothing to do with your poem, yet for some reason,
I stopped off in the middle of my night and composed these words here.  

a poet who cares

Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-04-18 02:36 PM


Hope

Your words are brilliant but I had hoped to see you write as if you took life by the scruff, said 'I have this talent to write' and wrote words that fill someone up to over-brimming.

Your ability to write, your'e skills are something I have always admired

There is a sky, there is a world, there is you with your talent and in your words it seems almost as if you are sacrificing that talent.

I am out of order on this, but your quality screams use it

Dave

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