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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2006-04-15 09:06 PM



Where I Begin

Two fingers, taking pulse
Stroking cheek
Tracing lips

Through your mind
Secret places
Finding facts an ellipse

Drawing pictures
On your skin
In the dark circles spin

Sifting stars to be seen
Renegade so serene
Edging under the dream

Drifting down
Making waves
Visiting carnal caves

Tracing back
Once have been
Tell me where I begin

Copyright Kkh 4/15/06

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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1 posted 2006-04-15 09:08 PM


Hi Kathleen~
wonderful write - most interesting indeed.
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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2 posted 2006-04-15 09:15 PM


Where?  Where the moons collide...where
stars fill the night skies...where hearts
beat as one...  Beautifully penned K.

Ericc
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3 posted 2006-04-17 12:40 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

WindWalker
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4 posted 2006-04-17 01:13 PM


This was just Beautiful!!!!!!!! Well crafted too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Enchantress
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5 posted 2006-04-17 01:41 PM


Softly sensual...absolutely beautiful Kathleen.

Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2006-04-17 07:11 PM


lovely writing~

M

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7 posted 2006-04-17 09:05 PM



Y'know what?

It's the "renegade"
that made me smile!


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