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0 posted 2006-04-15 04:19 PM


Sterling, the spoon that touched soft moist lips
and daintily sipped a delicate sip.
Enticing, inviting, inciting and more
left for a finger to slowly explore.

Gold, the hair that flows in the breeze
waving like waters that roll and crest
such a light fragrance I surely attest.

Diamond as hard as the earth at it’s core
reminding, defining, divining and more
Wanted and wished of..fascination’s adore.

A gem, a jewel, a goblet to hold
as one eyes another, brazen and bold.
Centuries sought for, as seconds unfold and
whispers bring shivers....
Glances bring smiles....
Giggles bring forevers
as two walk these miles.

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1 posted 2006-04-15 05:11 PM


whispers bring shivers....
Glances bring smiles....
Giggles bring forevers


that's awesome!!

wonderous write my friend!

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2 posted 2006-04-15 09:38 PM


"A gem, a jewel, a goblet to hold
as one eyes another, brazen and bold.
Centuries sought for, as seconds unfold and
whispers bring shivers....
Glances bring smiles....
Giggles bring forevers
as two walk these miles."

Beautiful Barry...
and, you just gave me shivers
the good kind.

Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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3 posted 2006-04-15 11:59 PM


I love it when attraction turns to something much more substantial and hearts go the distance.  This is a smile!

~ Karen

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4 posted 2006-04-19 09:10 PM


Sweet.....you write Happy better than anybody!

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5 posted 2006-04-19 09:16 PM


Barry....you write lovely love here.  Enjoyed!  
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