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Open Poetry #37

I see red

playing.with.crayons
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since 2006-01-02

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Neverland

0 posted 2006-04-15 03:10 AM

I am the sparkling ocean,
but not inside my head
For when I close my eyes
I see red, I see red

I am the winnning punter
I am the golden crown
I am the playful puppy
and I never wear a frown

I am the babies smile
I am the silver moon
I'm the rainclouds in a drought
I'm the sugar on your spoon

I am a mothers lap
on a cold and lonely day.
I am a best friends hug
when all the others turn away

But focus on my surface
and near my heart, softly tread
For when I close my eyes
I see red, I see red

farewell the ash-tray girl

playing.with.crayons
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since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

1 posted 2006-04-15 05:25 AM

Found this in a diary, from years ago. Anyway, I must dash. happy writing.

farewell the ash-tray girl

passing shadows
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displaced

2 posted 2006-04-15 08:12 AM

such beautiful things you are

I like this one!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

3 posted 2006-04-15 08:41 AM

You may see red but this poem was coloured with soft, pink crayons!

playing.with.crayons
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since 2006-01-02

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4 posted 2006-04-15 11:05 PM

thank you both for such sweet replies.
*grin* *grin* *grin*
I am not all those lovely things right now I promise. Steadily working my way through many easter eggs and looking like a blimp.
hugs. xxx

farewell the ash-tray girl

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