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silentwhisper
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0 posted 2006-04-13 05:37 PM



Do you remember the stars?

You told me to remind you about the stars.

You said that if you ever forgot, I was to remind you of the stars and it would all be OK.

You told me to remind you of how you felt that night.

How nothing else mattered, and you could have been falling off the edge of forever and you would not of cared.

You told me to remind you of how small you felt looking up at the stars, but with me by your side you felt safe.... you felt secure.

You felt like the sky was watching over you...protecting you!

And then you told me not to be afraid anymore...

For your tears were not tears of sadness, but happiness...a reflection of how you felt inside.

And that we were gonna be OK.

For tonight the sky was ours

We were finally together.

Please tell me that you remember the stars?



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Bodger
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1 posted 2006-04-13 09:31 PM


Stars in your eyes and the keyboard

Dave

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2006-04-13 10:13 PM


Welcome to Passions.

Heartfelt first post.
Enjoyed reading you.
TD

Sunshine
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3 posted 2006-04-13 10:26 PM


First of all, I am enjoying your username.

Second, the message in your first post speaks volumes of your innermost being, and your love of ever.

Third...

Welcome to Passions!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

bubblesleave
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4 posted 2006-04-13 11:00 PM


"How nothing else mattered, and you could have been falling off the edge of forever and you would not of cared."

Great line!

Welcome,

Bubbles

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5 posted 2006-04-14 02:50 AM


Stunning first post.. into my library it goes.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2006-04-14 04:33 AM


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Beautiful write!
I'll be looking for more of your work!

1slick_lady
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7 posted 2006-04-14 08:06 PM


who could forget the stars?
Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2006-04-14 08:11 PM


What a wonderful way to say hello, here I am to Pips!
Welcome, and thanks for the lovely write.

Magnus
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9 posted 2006-04-14 08:27 PM


Nicely done,  enjoyed reading.  Welcome to
Passions...hope you enjoy yourself.

The Lady
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10 posted 2006-04-14 09:55 PM



Oh my. I'm remembering the stars now. Welcome silentwhisper. More please.


tracie66
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11 posted 2006-04-15 08:52 PM


this is beautiful and very touching - welcome to passions, you'll enjoy it here I'm sure
Great first post~
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Enchantress
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12 posted 2006-04-15 09:26 PM


This is so beautiful!
Welcome to Passions in Poetry.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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