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Sound of Water |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Father fishes a river That flows under a bridge A train passes over Its whistle sounds North of a road That leads into town To one side the house Where a young woman lives Autumn has colored The leaves of the trees How I see them Through separate years The sun sets slowly In the western sky Reeds rustle softly A night bird sings |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A poem that teases at all the senses... enjoyed _____ ___ice ><> |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
John~ Such a serene word scene~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Excellent and so tightly written. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is about as perfect as a poem can get. I really needed this and will re-read it many, many times, especially when stress tries to get the better of me. - Owl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very serene!! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
the best time to learn fishing from father but "I" looked around and dreaming. very nice poem. |
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