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Sweeping Spring.
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Sweeping Spring. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Hawthorn flowers fully open, buds of new green on trees. Calmer the winds do soften, gone the days of winter freeze. Willows lime-yellow dusting, wildfowl bobbing on meres rippling, partridges surprising flight bursting, gulls lightly through air tippling. Goldfinches, their colour burning into my memory, pigeons walking fields of verdant green. Amber days of iluminated imagery, precious sights that must be seen. http://wordsthoughtsfeelings.blogspot.com [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (04-14-2006 04:42 PM).] |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
Your poems are just paintings indeed, you have an extremely vivid way of writing, well done! And by the way, hawthorne is one of my absolute favourite words in the English language (though I think you may have switched the t and the h)  Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! The world forgetting, by the world forgot. Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!" |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Androgynous..thank you for your kind comments..and also for the spotting of my typos..BTW ...hawthorn is spelled without the ''e'' on the end...just to let you know.. Goldenrose. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful image here GR must be seen indeed! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you Dixie..it is geting a little warmer here now..things are waking up.. Goldenrose. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you for this beautiful basking in nature. - Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for taking me out of the house and into the revitalizing beauty of nature! Spring hugs 'n flowers, Linda  |
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