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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I try to understand the mechanics of this daily action, what is it that prompts this same movement, and how then does this, in turn evolve into that reaction and why... oh why does it continually repeat itself right down to the exact moment when the bells chime? Still, it seems to be just a thin line that separates yesterday from today and tomorrow again, it will be the same way the motion, perpetually carrying on; progressing forward down the same beaten trail flailing numbly through this existence circling mechanistically in vortical undulations relentlessly unrealistic. it's better than I could have planned, it's made me who I am...(Trace Adkins) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so many days are like that..but then you get that one that can change everything ~~hugs~~ and Happy Easter M |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Gentle Spirit,I seen an episode of Steinfeld where George decided to do everything the opposite of what he would normally do. It was hilarious and it sure changed his day! Beautiful expression as usual! :-) |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
The reptitveness of life..yes i understand this.....but then there are people who would like to have the repetitiveness in their life..there are always those more unfortunate than ourselves..thank you for this... Goldenrose. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understood... deeply felt definitely time for something new  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
hey all, I've been gone for awhile and apologize for not replying sooner. Thanks for stop in, each of you. Hugs. |
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